This is my neighborhood.

Last post 09-09-2008 10:05 PM by Otilia Carrillo. 5 replies.

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09-07-2008 2:34 PM

Otilia Carrillo
Joined on 05-15-2008
Mexico
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This is my neighborhood.

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This was taken infront of my daughters window.In this day i am taking self study brushes course with Karen and I am practising

Otilia Carrillo

09-07-2008 4:19 PM In reply to

Dianne Paine
Joined on 01-03-2008
Melbourne, Australia
Posts 680

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Very nice Otilia, I feel like I have stepped inside your world for a moment. I love the way you have done the roof.

09-08-2008 4:11 AM In reply to

Anne
Joined on 04-03-2008
Wiltshire, England
Posts 933

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This looks like a stunning place to live. I think the trees at the front of the picture need to be a little more in focus, to give a sense of depth.

Anne A.

09-08-2008 9:46 AM In reply to

artisan9
Joined on 06-24-2008
Farmington, NM
Posts 238

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Otilia, this is good and has good composition. I agree with Ann that the foreground needs more focus while leaving the trees further away as they are. The building roof and edges are very good.

Artisan9 - Ron

09-09-2008 10:31 AM In reply to

sredd68
Joined on 08-02-2008
Newark, NJ
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I like it but like the others have said the foreground trees need some focus. other than that it looks as though it's part of a dream, almost 3D.

Simon

09-09-2008 10:05 PM In reply to

Otilia Carrillo
Joined on 05-15-2008
Mexico
Posts 104

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Thank you, For your opinion, in fact the real problem is that the house is to tall and if I get closed, the litlle mountains can`t be saw. also the camera that I am using is a kodad without focus. it is a very comercial camera.

Otilia Carrillo

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